15 Quick Pitch Tips for Kick Ass Presentations

April 20, 2009

The pitch isn’t the only thing that will make your business successful; far from it. But it sure does matter when you have an opportunity to get on stage and present. Those opportunities may be few and far between, but you don’t want to blow them. And opportunities to pitch your business should happen all the time – because ultimately we’re always pitching, whether it’s investors, customers, business partners, candidates, spouses, or random people we catch on the street. Pitching and presenting are critical skills for startup owners.

After attending the YES Entrepreneurship Conference and watching a handful of young startups do their 5-minute pitches, and jotting down some notes, here are 15 quick pitch tips. First, let me say that I was impressed with all the presentations. For very early stage startups, with minimal (if any) pitch / presentation training, they did a good job. Pitching isn’t easy. And it takes a long time to learn how to do well. And it takes continual effort. So kudos to everyone that had the guts and willingness to get on stage in front of the audience and share their dreams.

  1. Pitch Solo. Most of the companies that pitched at the YES Conference did so with 2 (or 3) people. If I remember correctly, there was only 1 solo pitch. The problem with having two (or more) people pitch is that it’s distracting. The audience can’t follow as easily. It’s made worse when transitions between presenters are clunky, or seemingly at random. Or when presenters interrupt or talk over one another (say, during a Q&A session.) Having one presenter allows you to pick the strongest person for the job, and lets that person get into their own rhythm. You might have someone else controlling your PowerPoint slides (for example) but stick to one person who does the talking.

    This doesn’t mean you don’t reference your other team members and highlight their skills and the value they bring to the company. Just don’t have everyone presenting.

  2. Tell a Story. Even in a short presentation you have time to tell the audience a story and improve your chances of creating meaningful context. Yes, we need to understand things like market opportunity, competitive advantages, business models, etc. but it’s the story and relevancy it creates in our lives (or the lives of other people we think about at that moment) that make the presentation worthwhile and memorable. Stories can be extremely varied, but your best chance of creating a story is near the beginning, as you’re describing the problem that you solve. Make that problem relevant to me and I’ll pay much more attention.
  3. No Wimpy Words Allowed. Wimpy words diminish credibility and the power of a presentation. “I think…” is wimpy. We know you think it, because you’re saying it – so just get to the point. “We believe…” is wimpy too. It’s OK to state assumptions (and it’s even OK during a Q&A session, for example, to admit you don’t know the answers to certain questions), but cut the wimpy words. Another classic, “What we’re trying to do…” You’re not trying, you are. Simple as that. Even if you haven’t even started your business, you’re already doing it, not just trying to do it. Yoda was right about that one.

    Removing the wimpy words from your presentation is hard. They’re often ingrained in our speech. But that leads me to point #3…

  4. Practice. Very few of us are natural presenters. I only know of a couple people who don’t get nervous on stage (which I still believe is unnatural and probably some kind of strange condition!) You can conquer fear (to a degree) and certainly power through your fear with practice. Practice in front of a mirror. Practice in front of your team members. Practice in front of other people. I’ve found the key is to practice so much that it’s almost robotic, and then you deconstruct it, loosen up and make sure it comes across naturally. If you come across too robotic, and your presentation appears too memorized it’s very difficult to bring out the necessary passion and excitement. It’s hard to capture the audience’s attention when every word is perfectly spoken, spaced out and said in a monotonous, even tone. So practice. Practice. And practice some more. Then forget everything you’ve memorized and just do it.
  5. Keep Track of Time. If you’re given 5 minutes, make sure you say what you need to say in 5 minutes, not 5 minutes and 5 seconds. Just five. If you’re given 10 minutes, that’s fine, but stick to the time allotted. Oftentimes saying less is better than saying more; so don’t try and cram 10 minutes worth of words into 5 minutes of time. It won’t work.
  6. Keep it Simple Stupid. I’m not an expert in your business. You are. I might not even know a single thing about your specific industry or how it operates. So avoid anything that’s overly complicated when explaining your startup. Keep things simple. And be careful about trying to teach, especially in short presentations. There’s not a lot of time, and frankly I don’t want to be taught (nor do I want to be an expert in what you do) … I want to be convinced that there’s a big enough opportunity in what you do that I should be interested in it. And I need to be convinced that you know what you’re talking about, without getting lost in jargon, acronyms or in-depth industry details. You can teach me later…
  7. Humor is Hard. Cracking jokes in a presentation is risky. If no one laughs you’re left on stage looking like a putz. Be very careful with humor. On top of that, humor doesn’t necessarily capture people’s attention. They might chuckle, but what you really want them doing is paying attention to your kick ass startup idea.
  8. Gimmicks are Worse. Gimmicks are even riskier than the use of humor. Props, for example, can very quickly make you look silly. Props and gimmicks might not work on stage, and then you’re stuck. In some cases a prop might be great, especially if it’s core to your business, but don’t distract the audience with it too much; show it, use it, grab people’s attention and then get to the meat & potatoes of your presentation.
  9. Expect the Obvious Questions. Some issues are universal for businesses. Target markets, for example. Every business has a target market. And it’s fairly important to know the size of that target market, especially if someone asks you about it. I did say in a previous point that it’s OK to admit when you don’t know the answer to a question; let’s face it, you can’t know everything. But there are some obvious questions you can expect (if you don’t address them properly in your presentation), and you need to be ready for those. Incidentally, it’s those obvious questions that you need to address during your presentation (so you don’t leave it to people to ask you!)

    Other obvious questions will be about your business model (how you make money), your competition (it always exists), and your sales & marketing strategy (often a startup’s weakest aspect).

  10. When Things Fail (And They Will) Power Through. PowerPoint presentations are notorious for not working just when you need them. Live demonstrations of your product can fail as well. When something goes wrong, you have to power through it. There’s no other choice. It’s extremely hard to do, although lots of practice will help. When we launched Standout Jobs at DEMO, the conference organizers suggested that we practice contingency presentations, should something go wrong. At the YES Conference, one group’s presentation didn’t work. They managed to get through very nicely, so kudos to them.
  11. Don’t Look Back. When your presentation does work, and they put it on a big screen behind you, don’t look at it. This was part of the advice I received from David S. Rose of the New York Angels, and it makes sense. When you look back, you lose eye contact with your audience. You’re giving yourself the opportunity to be distracted and it can easily break your rhythm. Incidentally, it’s almost impossible to do; we’re just naturally inclined to look back at our presentation. But do your best to avoid looking back – and if you can gain some mastery of this, it will mean you can also do much better in emergency situations.
  12. Tell Me What I’m About to See. Another difficult thing to do is to talk ahead of the slides that you’re showing. Tell me what I’m about to see on the next PowerPoint slide (without saying, “What you’re about to see…”). But if you can master this skill it means you’ve gotten so comfortable giving your presentation that it flows beautifully. One of the presenters at the Conference had a very nice slide with the number “10%”. That’s all that was on the slide (very nicely done.) With better timing, the presenter would have been speaking about the number before it appeared on the screen, because the minute it did, I started wondering about what it meant. And the number isn’t very high after all, it’s only 10%, so it seemed a bit weak. It wasn’t a weak statistic for them, and it was a fairly strong way for the presenter to end their pitch, but I was already thinking ahead of where he was in the presentation when I first saw it.
  13. Tell Us What You Do Upfront. Within the first 30 seconds of your presentation I need to know exactly what you do and why I should care. If you can’t get that boiled down into 30 seconds, and you can’t start your presentation with that information, you’re going to lose me (and most people.)
  14. Don’t Save the Best for Last. This is a common mistake – people want to end with a punch. But as I just pointed out, the “aha!” moment really belongs at the beginning. The catchphrase, elevator pitch, 30 second story on what you do and why I should care belongs at the beginning, but too often people leave this until the end when most people have stopped paying attention.
  15. But Don’t End Weakly. No surprise, the ending still has to be strong. But the point of the ending isn’t to explain what you do, because if you’re using the ending for that you’ve lost. The end of your presentation is there to hammer home your key messages (of which I would recommend only having 1-3) — the things you absolutely want people to remember when they leave and talk about you (and your presentation) for days thereafter. The ending doesn’t have to be flashy, it has to be concise, convincing and concrete.

Pitching is hard, whether it’s on stage, in a boardroom, on a conference call or anywhere else for that matter. Most of us are not natural born salespeople. It takes work and practice. But without a doubt you can improve at it; even if you’re shy or introverted. Good luck!

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  • I don' know if i am a good presenter but i gave more than 150 conferences and i agree with all of this. And i am sure il can make progress, especially in #2 #3 #5 : thank you from France !
  • Giving a public speech or presentation is a very hard task. I've had to give a few speeches in my life so far and I was extremely nervous every time. Luckily for me though I had the benefit of taking a public speaking course through college and it really helped me develop some techniques to help me look and sound confident even when my knees are knocking.

    I completely agree with all the pitch tips you have mentioned here, especially number four. Practicing your speech before hand will give you confidence, help you work out all the kinks, and help you prepare for any foul ups.
  • I've found the best way to put forward a presentation is to start off in their shoes. Everything I say, every slide I make I put myself where they are and say: 'Does this help me and my business'.
  • I've done very minimal pitching. Found this guide through Google, and it's great. Thanks for the tips, I've realized a few things I should pay attention to when preparing as well as presenting it. Thanks for the help, possibly subscribing too :)
  • Nice one my friend. Good reference points and I thank you. You know the reason people are in the audience listening to your pitch is not to hear about you but what you can do for them!
    The value you bring. The benefits to them that your product and services give them.
    I get fed up with listening to the prat that talks about how good they are and what they have done; and how successful they are; and that its a family business with all of the family involved since 1956 etc etc .
    Tell 'em how they benefit, what's in it for them. And then tell 'em how they go about getting it!
    The Baldchemist
  • Ben,

    How long do you think that entrepreneurs should spend on the team's background? You always hear venture capitalists and other investors say "we invest in people first and then the idea second." However, its easy to spend way too long talking about team members strengths and ability to execute on the business and not enough time describing the ins and outs of the business.

    Awesome post, as an entrepreneur starting to do pitches I will be sure to re-read this every time I get in front of people and investors.
  • When giving a relatively quick presentation you don't want to go into a ton of details on the founders. Highlight key, relevant points. You don't want to give a history lesson or regurgitate your resumes. Investors DO invest in people, but that's going to revolve around more than just "are these guys ultra-qualified to run this specific startup." Think of any relationship in that regard, and how you build those relationships.
  • Deborah
    Ben,

    I completely agree. There is no question that the management team of an entrepreneurial venture is an essential component of a VCs consideration; however, when you only have 2 min to pitch, equal time must also be spent on answering the "what" "why" and "how" of your business. VCs are ultimately funding the idea.

    You are sharing truly valuable information and having coached entrepreneurs for over 8 years, FundingPost has given many of these tips at its past pitching workshops- #4,5,6,13 &14 are ones we reiterate often: http://www.fundingpost.com/events.asp
  • Interesting tips. Practice is definately the way to beat surprises and build great audience confidence.

    You don't necessarily need to be a master at public speaking, but rather make sure that your message is delivered like following a map. Be precise, confident and make sure you keep the subject strong and interesting.

    Thanks for the post.
  • Regarding #3 (no wimpy words), I think the problem for a lot of presenters is that wimpy words aren't only part of their vocabulary, but also part of their mentality. The corollary is that if you don't feel strongly enough about the content of your presentation to avoid wimpy words, it's not the right time for you to present.
  • Ryan - I agree, wimpy words may very well be part of a person's mentality, and they very likely, they don't realize that the words are wimpy. In some cases, they might not be. Debating casually with friends, for example - saying "I think" isn't going to really hamper the discussion. So this is one of those cases where someone has to train themselves out of "bad habits" and then re-train themselves into good happens for great presentations.
  • Well, I hate to bring up gender, but I see this much more with women than with men. In many cultures, women have are taught that it is very important not to boast about who they are or what they do. They are very humble, but it comes off as wimpy. I've worked with women to try and coach them out of this, but it is really hard.
  • Fantastic article on presentations. We make regular presentations to the franchise industry and can wholly endorse this article as well as picking up some helpful tips ourselves. Good work!
  • Fantastic article on presentations. We make regular presentations to the franchise industry and can wholly endorse this article as well as picking up some helpful tips ourselves. Good work! yes......
  • # 12 was very helpful and if done skillfully can really setup certain number goals.

    All 15 were spot on and very helpful. I teach business seminars all the time yet found these of extreme value.

    Thank you.
  • Thank you for your article.

    It's very useful too for someone like me who's about to embark on the entire networking and presentation journey. It gives me some pointers on where to start and what to do and prepare.

    Only thing I wouldn't mind more of would be some more examples since I learn better than way than by abstract general ideas. Like, what is a weak ending and what is a strong ending?

    I'm going to browse around to see if you have any suggestions on what to put IN a presentation too, that's my big question right now. Again, thanks for a useful post. Cheers!
  • Pia - Real life examples are harder to come by, but a weak ending is when you see someone say something like, "OK...so, I guess that's it. Um, thank you." Classic example of someone not really knowing HOW to end the presentation strongly.

    A good ending is to summarize the key messages from your presentation in one slide. "Here are the 3 key points to remember...1, 2, 3..."
  • Excellent post. I definitely agree with the wimpy words. I even see that a lot of that on blogs and like you said in the comments it's a habit that can be broken. I'll have to come back to this when I have a presentation to do. Thanks!
  • I agree that you see wimpy writing in blogs as well. But that's more easily corrected. Write your blog post and then review it a few times with an eye for those little details. Take out the wimpy words and you'll find yourself with a much more effective blog post.
  • Very informative post with detailed simple description about all the tips. I belive that practice makes perfect and to keep to the point is the best thing to do in a presentation. Thanks for sharing the tips.
  • Great post and right on time for me. I am in the process of pitching to angels for one of my businesses. There are some great take aways from this article. Like a lot of your readers, I like to "Wimpy "words" paragraph as well.
  • Great post, thank you! I think your #12 is more about the slide transitions. When you are practicing, you need to know your next slide and set the stage for it before it appears. I always make people write down their transitions for each slide - it makes the presentation much more polished.

    I love the comment about wimpy language. I have spent a lot of time coaching people on these pitches and that is the first thing I look for.

    I have added your article to my collection of best resources for pitching venture capitalists: http://www.livebinders.com/play/play?id=625
  • Barbara - You're right, it is about slide transitions, and knowing those so well that you can move smoothly between slides and be talking about what people are GOING to see, not look back to explain to them what they're looking at right now...
  • Hi

    I think (oh no, it's a wimpy word!!!! - start again).

    Practice is the most important thing. Use a video camera to record your presentation so that you can see it as others do.

    Neil
  • "Don't save the best for last." Im all into it.
  • A good presentation is definitely a fine art. Thank you for these great tips!
  • Self confidence, presentation and tone of your voice are key elements in the success of any presentation.
  • One thing I notice with a lot of new presenters is that they lack flow and often forget the call to action.

    I was at a small conference the other day and this young guy go up and told a great story and while he was nervous I could see and hear in his voice that he was passionate about his topic. Excitement is addictive and can get you through many situations even when you don't have the skill.

    When he finished he simply said thank you and walked off the stage. He could have added just a small statement then to bring the crowd in.

    Now I can draw quite a crowd at conferences not because I am a salesman, I am more of a teacher so can be a bit dry at times, but I have found that your ending statement is one of the most powerful parts of your whole presentation.

    It's when everyone wakes up OL.

    Que
  • Good stuff!

    I was a stand-up comic for many years, so public speaking was never an issue for me, but some of these tips are things I hadn't considered in previous presentations... Particularly #3.

    Thanks!
  • Presentation is everything. You can have a great product but if you can't get in there and really sell it, it's not going to go anywhere. These are some great tips you have here.

    I think the two MOST important tips of any presentation are:

    1) To believe what you are saying, sell sell sell. If you are feeling it so will everyone else.

    2) Be shallow. Seriously, looks count, make sure any and all presentation materials you display rock. They need to be color coordinated and high class all the way. Don't skimp because the way it looks is a huge part of the overall feel of the product, service or brand.
  • Very good read. I am a very big fan of the KISS theme as well and have seen it translate into far more conversions than trying to "wow the crowd" they might say with visuals and what not. Keep up the good work.
  • #3 is a tough one to live by. Sometimes, humility has me inserting "I think" or "I believe" into my speech, and it's probably too wimpy for presentations.

    I am disappointed at how often I say "ummmm." I need to cut that out.
  • This should be renamed the Presentation Commandments. The thing is, these are often taught and VERY seldomly followed. I would say that 90% of the presentations I have sat through did not do the majority of the things outlined here, or did them poorly.

    I never understood why people are so bad at public speaking...
  • Hey Ben, just found your blog. I remember my first pitch to an Angel ever. I walked in, hands sweaty cuz of nervousness... I actually went solo.

    When it came time to present, I remember that I had a killer opening. Like, I had been practicing this for hours the night before, perfecting it so that the Angels would get a laugh out of it.

    I shoot the zinger... and if fails miserably. I was devastated, but it really was a great learning experience that I carry with me from now on.

    Look forward to more great reading

    - Jun Loayza
  • Thanks for the comment. It sounds like you made an attempt at humor, which is ultra-risky. I've seen it fail many more times than it's succeeded. And it looks like you had that exact experience.
  • Hahahah, yea, but I think next time I'll be much better prepared. I've been doing a lot of video interview of people on my vlog and it really has helped me realize the subtleties of the human mannerisms and language.

    When I edit the video, I'm amazed at how many ummmsss, likes, and pauses people have
  • Thanks for the great article, especially #6 and #7. Your attempt to be funny can really leave me groaning and looking for an exit. Also, your scientific mumbo-jumbo (what a great word) puts me to sleep.
  • about the #12 point - Tell Me What I’m About to See. I think that the most important thing is to use animations to avoid show the next point of your debate. If people looks at what they'll be earing next they won't pay the necessary attention until the next point losing the link from one concept to another. This works expecially with clients. Never show the price before you've explained all the benefits of your product.
  • I always get told to drop the wimpy words when I give a presentation. You're right that it's hard to leave these words out but I listen to what people suggest I say instead and it never sounds right to me. Have you got examples of how you would change the examples you give of wimpy words?
  • Write out a few sentences from a presentation, for example: "I think the market is ready for this new idea." And then take out "I think" so the sentence is "The market is ready for this new idea."
  • I think one of the biggest things is to keep going if there is an error of speech or technically. Nothing is worse than someone getting flustered at a mistake -- like the 'weak' phrases, it will really drag down the effectiveness of the presentation.
  • Absolutely. You can't get flustered during a presentation. When we launched Standout Jobs at DEMO 2008 they told us to make sure we practice it "if everything is perfect" and then have a back-up presentation ready if everything fails. So you can't rely, for example, on the PowerPoint presentation working, or your live demo working, you have to just power through - as gracefully as possible.
  • The big problem with "humor" is that a lot of people who think they are funny aren't.

    And wasting some time out of a 5min pitch to discover you aren't funny isn't a good thing.
  • Agreed. Humor is too risky - on stage or in a small setting - if you don't get the laughs you expected it will throw you off.
  • Such great advice for anyone who has ever given, is planning to give, or will ever give a presentation!

    Thanks for these wonderful tips!

    www.stunningannak.etsy.com
  • Very useful information! Especially I remember the point one Solo pitch. I thought it is more interesting when in presentation several persons take part. Now I think I should try Solo pitch in my next presentation. Thanks!
  • Hey Ben,
    I really think #4 is connected to an observation you make earlier in the post:
    "And opportunities to pitch your business should happen all the time - because ultimately we’re always pitching, whether it’s investors, customers, business partners, candidates, spouses, or random people we catch on the street."
    Pitching is really just an extension of answering questions and educating potential customers about why they should use your product/service and this you should be doing all the time. When you do a lot of talking with customers I think it is a kind of practice because you hear from them what they feel is important and what is not. This can get rid of a lot of misconceptions on your part about how people are seeing your product and helps you understand their needs.
  • Shawn - I agree. Talking to customers every day in real ways will help you improve on your pitching significantly. Also helps the business in bigger ways too.
  • lots of people have already said it but still I am saying it, your tips are really good thanks for sharing them
  • When I was in the Marine Corps and had to sit through presentations, the best presentations always started with a joke of some kind. Starting with a joke caused the audience to loosen up and ease into the presentation. Great list though.
  • Be confident. Especially in pitches. Know and believe your idea is the best. It doesn't matter what the competition is because your better then them and you will prevail. If you dont believe in your idea how the hell is anyone going to get on board.
  • Those are some good tips, from what I've learned, you should keep it short and simple, yeah. Especially over the internet, people don't like to sit there and read through a block of text. You try to keep it entertaining, while informing and to the point.
  • nice article..

    i try this tips in my next persentations..

    thanx
  • Powerpoint has been the curse of presentations and pitching! I have seen too many presentations with 12pt font text filling up the slide and then the presenter reading every single word!

    Keep your lines down to a minimum (I prefer 4-6) and keep each line to a minimum (try no more than 7 a good rule of thumb to be concise).

    Don't let the PPT overpower you. In fact, I would suggest practicing without it just so your focus is on presenting an awesome pitch!

    Kudos on the article!

    Brian
  • To be a presenter is not always about the talent, but it is bonus if you have one. I like the fourth point 'Practice'. Practice a lot to become a good presenter.
  • ravm
    You should connect with the guys at Flatterline, a Phoenix Ruby on Rails development company. I think there's a lot you could collaborate on.
  • kristinthompson
    Great tips. Good advice. I have seen so many soft presentations are you are hitting the nail on the head there. Staring at the slides....big "no no". Saving your "wow" moment..not a good idea. If you want to gain momentum, try putting your wow in the middle, but don't leave it until the end. Grab at the get go.

    There are some great tips on getting your audience engaged early on http://www.PresentationTrainingBlog.com Might want to check that out too.

    Keep the tips coming! :) Be well!
  • Thanks, this is a great article. My favorite is number 14. I stronlgy agree that the best should not just be placed at last,...it should be at your best from the start to the end. Consistency matters a lot.
  • wilkie2726
    it's all about confidence and self-assurance, in terms of your dleivery, still it helps having throughly researched potential questions!

    www.guide-to-everything.com
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